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Workshop #185: She Dance Ah by Spenzii

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This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. What useful feedback can you give the artist? The floor is yours to talk about the track and how they can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.

Description of the track:

She dance - Spenzii (Graveunit Entertainment 2010)

Terms of Use: This property is fully owned by Spenzii. Anyone who wishes to use it or remix it need to get permission from Spenzii first to avoid legal action taken against them. Comments and other help to improve on the music are welcome via email: smark@alumni.dwu.ac.pg

Have a listen to the track and offer your constructive criticism for this Workshop in the comments section.

  • Do you enjoy the song or track itself? Does it have potential?
  • Can the arrangement be improved?
  • How did you find the mix? What would you do differently?
  • What do you enjoy about the rhythm track? What can be done to improve it?
  • Is the choice of instruments relevant and effective for the style/song?
  • Are the lyrics (if any) effective? Does the style, arrangement and genre of the song suit them?
  • Can you suggest any specific techniques that might improve the track?
  • Do you have any other constructive feedback?

Need constructive criticism on your own tracks? Submit them for a workshop using this form.

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