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Workshop #259: Szarvasbikuci by Mestahh

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This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. What useful feedback can you give the artist? The floor is yours to talk about the track and how they can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.

Description of the track:

A song for a friend.

Artist's website: http://soundcloud.com/mestahh

Lyrics:

The lyrics are in Hungarian. It's based on my friend's pick up lines. All of my other friends are just laughing at them but the girls seems to believe them all the time although they are very lame. "You are the most beautiful girl here", "I was waiting for you for years", "My heart was broken a lot of times but I trust you from the moment I saw you enter the room", "I believe in honesty" and so on.

Terms of Use: Users can stream the track for the purposes of giving feedback but cannot download or redistribute it.


Have a listen to the track and offer your constructive criticism for this Workshop in the comments section. Feel free to offer any type of advice - arrangement, mix, lyrics, performance. And remember to play nice - be constructive!

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