Workshop #304: "There Is A Day That's Coming" by Chris Fowler
This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. What useful feedback can you give the artist? The floor is yours to talk about the track and how they can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.
Description of the track:
This is a song about the hope and expectancy we have of living with Jesus forever. It's is an acoustic recording on a small Presonus 4-channel USB interface with Studio One software. Nothing fancy, but it's enough to get the idea across.
Artist's website: facebook.com/acousticfowler
when You will step out on the clouds
and take us home to be with You
Your children from all over
will gather loud to sing Your praise
we will forever worship You
all our suffering does not compare
to the joy that will be revealed
there will be no more despair
there will be no more crying
no pain to complicate the truth
there is just forever with You
Praise to the lamb who is worthy
the Lamb who sits upon the throne
with beauty like we've never known
Have a listen to the track and offer your constructive criticism for this Workshop in the comments section. Feel free to offer any type of advice - arrangement, mix, lyrics, performance. And remember to play nice - be constructive!