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Workshop #260: The Ten God's Commandments, Produced By Kelvinado

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Description of the track:

This song is about the Ten Commandments of God and obeying them. It was written to teach people about the Ten Commandments Of God and their benefits. It was recorded using Cubase Sx3, produced and mastered using Adobe Audition 1.5.

Artist's website: www.kelvinado.com

Lyrics:

The Ten God’s Commandments –Written and Performed By Kelvinado (Kelvin .M. Mbewe)
Intro: Yo, Yo ,Yo Kelvinado In The Building Again, This Time It’s About The Laws Yo, The Ten God’s Commandments, Yeah__________________.
Verse: 1
It’s 1 ,2 ,3 ,4 ,5 ,6 ,Seven ,Up To Ten, It’s God’s Laws, I Have Put In My Heart,It’s God’s Laws, I Will Obey,Coz God’s Law Is More Beneficial Than The Ten Crack Commandments , Coz Coz, The Kingdom Of God Forever It Will Last ,And In It There Is Plenty Of Peace ,And In It There Plenty Of Joy ,And In It No Suffering ,Mostly , You Have Eternal Life.

Chorus:
It’s The Ten God’s Commandments,
The Vital Laws I Will Obey,
Coz God’s Law We Need To Follow,
To Enter The Kingdom Of God,
It’s The Ten God’s Commandments,
The Vital Laws I Will I Will Obey,
Coz God’s Law We Need To Follow,
To Enter The Kingdom Of God

Verse: 2
The First Commandment ,You Shall Not Have Other God’s Before Me ,So ,Let’s Worship, One ,True ,God In Truth And Spirit ,The Second Commandment ,You Shall Not Make Idols Of Any Kind ,So Let’s Again Worship God In Truth And Spirit And The Third Commandment ,You Shall Not Misuse The Name Of The Lord Your God ,If You Do So You Will Be Held Guilty ,So I Won’t Do That ,And The Fourth Commandment Remember The Sabbath Day, To Keep It Holy ,So It’s Lawful That We Do Good ,like Saving Lives ,On Sabbath Day.

Chorus:
It’s The Ten God’s Commandments,
The Vital Laws I Will Obey,
Coz God’s Law We Need To Follow,
To Enter The Kingdom Of God,
It’s The Ten God’s Commandments,
The Vital Laws I Will Obey,
Coz God’s Law We Need To Follow,
To Enter The Kingdom Of God
Verse: 3
Honor Your Father ,And Your Mother Is The Fifth Commandment ,So, Let’s Respect ,Obey And Support Parents, Who Brought Us On Earth And Took Care Of Us In Our Childhood That Way We Will Live Longer And Prosper You Shall Not Murder, Is The Sixth Commandment, So Let’s Live In Harmony And Peace ,You Shall Not Commit Adultery Is The Seventh Commandment That Is No Voluntary Sex Between A Married Man And A Woman Other Than The Legal Spouse And The Other Way Round, Also You Commit Adultery In Your Heart With A Person When You Look ,At That Person ,To Lust ,For That Person ,You Shall Not Steal Is The Eighth Commandment, So Let’s Not Take Away Our Neighbor’s Property Unlawfully ,And The Ninth Commandment, You Shall Not Bear False Witness Against Your Neighbor Or Don’t Be A Liar And The Tenth Commandment You Shall Not Covet Your Neighbor’s Property
Chorus:
It’s The Ten God’s Commandments,
The Vital Laws I Will Obey,
Coz God’s Law We Need To Follow,
To Enter The Kingdom Of God,
It’s The Ten God’s Commandments,
The Vital Laws I Will Obey,
Coz God’s Law We Need To Follow,
To Enter The Kingdom Of God
Verse: 4
The Ten God’s Commandments Are Based On Love Coz The Fulfillment Of The Law is Love And They Are Summed Up Into Two Parts ,The First Part Consist Of The First ,Four Commandments And Is The First And Greatest Commandment It States: You Shall Love The Lord Your God With All Your Heart, With All Your Soul With All Your Mind And With All Your StrengthenAnd The Second Part Consist Of The Last ,Six Commandments And Is The Second Greatest Commandment It States: You Shall Love Your Neighbor As Yourself So,Even If You Are Doing Things Which Are Good But You Can’t Love Then You Will Never Inherit Eternal Life.

Chorus:
It’s The Ten God’s Commandments,
The Vital Laws I Will Obey,
Coz God’s Law We Need To Follow,
To Enter The Kingdom Of God,
It’s The Ten God’s Commandments,
The Vital Laws I Will Obey,
Coz God’s Law We Need To Follow,
To Enter The Kingdom Of God
Verse: 5
Yeah,Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,I Will Prosper Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,Live Longer Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,I Gat A Protector Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,Is God Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah ,So I Won’t Stumble No ,No ,No ,No ,In The Darkness No ,No ,No ,No ,Yeah. Kelvinado Mbeweno Yo, Yo, Yo, Yo.

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