Workshop #152: Trifonic - Lies by Pablo Gómez

At Audiotuts+ we regularly put up a reader track for workshopping and critique (find out how to submit a track). This is how it works: you upload your song, and every week or so we'll publish one here and step away from the podium. The floor is yours to talk about the track and how the artist can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.

This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. They have put their track (and their heart and soul) in your hands to learn and get useful feedback.

• Do you enjoy the song or track itself? Does it have potential?
• Can the arrangement be improved?
• How did you find the mix? What would you do differently?
• What do you enjoy about the rhythm track? What can be done to improve it?
• Is the choice of instruments relevant and effective for the style/song?
• Are the lyrics (if any) effective? Does the style, arrangement and genre of the song suit them?
• Can you suggest any specific techniques that might improve the track?
• Do you have any other constructive feedback?

Trifonic - Lies by Pablo Gómez

Artist's website: soundcloud.com/acaua

Description of the track:

Hey, I just finished this Vocal Trance Track using Creative Commons licensed vocals and am really pleased with the result, but I would like to get some different opinions about it. What do you think about the mix, the arrangement, the expression of the track? What would have you done different? Are the vocals too exposed or anyhow badly mixed? I'm very thankful for your support.

Sincerely
Pablo Gómez

Pablo Gómez feat. Trifonic - Lies by Pablo Gómez

Terms of Use: The track is allowed to be downloaded, since it's under a Creative Commons License.

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