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Workshop #159: 24 Hours by King Mob

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At Audiotuts+ we regularly put up a reader track for workshopping and critique (find out how to submit a track). This is how it works: you upload your song, and every week or so we'll publish one here and step away from the podium. The floor is yours to talk about the track and how the artist can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.

This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. They have put their track (and their heart and soul) in your hands to learn and get useful feedback.

  • Do you enjoy the song or track itself? Does it have potential?
  • Can the arrangement be improved?
  • How did you find the mix? What would you do differently?
  • What do you enjoy about the rhythm track? What can be done to improve it?
  • Is the choice of instruments relevant and effective for the style/song?
  • Are the lyrics (if any) effective? Does the style, arrangement and genre of the song suit them?
  • Can you suggest any specific techniques that might improve the track?
  • Do you have any other constructive feedback?

24 Hours by King Mob

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Description of the track:

This song is called "24 Hours". I have recently been experimenting with electronic dance music after spending years making rock, pop and hip hop. This is the first thing I'm pretty proud of. I know it's simple and it has a lot of cliches in it but I'm trying to learn technique. I'd love suggestions, comments, etc.

Most of the track was done in Reason. All the samples are from Reason. The mix was done in Logic.

Terms of Use: I have no objections to downloading. All my work is released under a Creative Commons Attribution, Non-Commercial, Share-A-Like license anyway.

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