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Description of the track:
This is my first official foray into the house/dance genre, and pretty much my first song ever produced to completion. This track started out with an intro inspired by Deadmau5's strobe, but then it sorta evolved into a dance/house title. Somewhere along the line I heard Rocky the Squirrel's voice in my head over the audio, and decided to sample some of that, as well.
The name "Flocky and Billwinkle" comes from the sampled audio, in addition to this band name my friend and I are kicking around, "Duckface". It's sort of a play on words.
Any feedback is appreciated! I've almost entirely lost my objectivity, haha.
Artist's website: soundcloud.com/tsunio
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