This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. What useful feedback can you give the artist? The floor is yours to talk about the track and how they can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.

Description of the track:

This is a track that I did in about a day. I'd say I'm rather happy with it, but I'm just a bit unsure about the mix. I'd like to get some opinions on it in regards to creativity, mastering and the mix in general. Any and all opinions are very welcome. So, how did I do?

Artist's website: soundcloud.com/jesse-brown

Terms of Use: The track may be streamed for the purpose of giving feedback but may not be made available for download.

Have a listen to the track and offer your constructive criticism for this Workshop in the comments section.

• Do you enjoy the song or track itself? Does it have potential?
• Can the arrangement be improved?
• How did you find the mix? What would you do differently?
• What do you enjoy about the rhythm track? What can be done to improve it?
• Is the choice of instruments relevant and effective for the style/song?
• Are the lyrics (if any) effective? Does the style, arrangement and genre of the song suit them?
• Can you suggest any specific techniques that might improve the track?
• Do you have any other constructive feedback?

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