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Description of the track:
All instruments are live and original. Drums are made by us through logic. It is in the key of A with the lead guitar riff being in the A Dorian scale. All guitar parts are on an acoustic plugged straight into the desk. Effects on guitars include delay and reverb and the bass has been left un-touched. Big thanks to Audio Tuts on their mixing lessons, have learned a lot. There are two of us in the group and we are looking for comments and suggestions of any kind. Many thanks, Joe Chappell and Joe Matthews. The Joe Expierience.
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