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Workshop #236: I'm No Lady by Rubix (feat. Christina Brehm & Vice V)

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Description of the track:

Aspiring songwriter/producer/mixer. My go at a pop hit in the vein of Katy Perry.

Co-wrote, Produced, Engineered, Mixed and programmed - myself (Matt Rod).

All Pro Tools, mixed in the box. Tracked through an MBox pro (the older blue/white one!).

Artist's website: mattrodmusic.com

Lyrics:

Ooh hey DJ tell me what I'm in for
'Cause ooh I think this drink is kicking in more
Hey, hey, I see you lookin' my
Way, way, why don't you meet me on the dance floor
Just come and meet me on the dance floor

CHORUS:
I'm no lady! I'll take you for a ride
I'll go crazy! Come on, don't be shy
Let's go baby, you know you can't deny
I'm no lady, lady yeah

Ooh hey DJ keep this party bumpin'
'Cause you know how to get my body jumpin'
Hey, hey, I see you lookin' my
Way, way, why don't you meet me on the dance floor
Just come and meet me on the dance floor

CHORUS

So I figured that was my cue to tell you what you got
'cause I know them other boys are gonna tell you what you're not
So look, just trying to have a nice time
Not saying that I could be your life line
But if we have the time of our lives, tonight, then I bet it could feel like a lifetime

Hands up fellas if you smooth and you know it
Said put your hands up ladies if your prince is a poet
Then I said: "I think this is something we need to pursue..."
She took my hand, led m through the crowd, and at that moment I knew

CHORUS

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