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Description of the track:
A cross sub genre track of progressive chords and an 8-bit style complextro drop with some harder undertones. I wrote this song during exams at school as a distraction from studying and majority of it was produced in a library with my Pioneer HDJ2000 headphones. I used Ableton as the DAW with Vengeance sample packs for drums, Aylenth1 and NI:Massive for soft synths. Hardware used was an M-Audio Keystation 49 and 2 KRK Rokit 5 monitors. Hope you enjoy.
Artist's website: soundcloud.com/brandedtravesty
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