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Description of the track:
A bit of a monster. A very simple, classical progression that has had some modern love. Recorded in Logic 9 using Kontakt 8 for a lot of the instruments, Superior Drummer 2.0 for the drums and played live on a Roland TD9-KX2. Nothing is sequenced all played live (although some cutting and pasting did go on!)
Artist's website: www.mojowill.com
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