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Description of the track:
This track right here is my personal favorite from all of the tracks I've made so far. It's a very emotional song that seeks to impact the listener and remind him/her of the fragile nature of life.
I used Logic Pro for creating the song. Logic factory samples and plug-ins were mainly used in the track, with the exception of slight use of EWQL SO.
"It is not length of life, but depth of life."
-Ralph Waldo Emerson-
Artist's website: marklaukkanen.tumblr.com
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