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Description of the track:
This track grew from a rap beat I was working on recently. While the underlying theme is reggae, the track (especially with the bass) ended up being more "lounge". The bass and guitar are real, and the synths are minimalist, trying to keep it sounding "analogue". Think of it as a proper band, but in a "stream of consciousness" mindset. The synths were made with Reason, all with Thor, the drums with Addictive Drums, and all mixed in Logic Pro 9. It is not mastered, though there is an SSL bus compressor on the stereo bus to glue it all together. Enjoy!
Artist's website: soundcloud.com/borya-x
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