This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. What useful feedback can you give the artist? The floor is yours to talk about the track and how they can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.
Description of the track:
An emotional song featuring mainly piano, harp and strings. Logic factory sounds and plug-ins were used for the most part.
“Nothing is ever really lost to us as long as we remember it.” - L.M. Montgomery
Artist's website: marklaukkanen.tumblr.com/
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