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Description of the track:
Urban/Commercial Pop concept created with sole intentions on submitting for a Justin Bieber album placement. "Highschool Heartbreak" was Produced using Logic Pro 9 by MDOTDASUPA and Co-Produced using ImageLine's FL Studio 10 by DRE BEATZ. A portion of the drums and instrumentation were created using the Akai MPD18 and MPK49.
Although we lacked the necessary resources in the end preventing us from getting the instrumental in the hands of Justin Bieber and/or his camp we managed to showcase our respective sounds and build a unique chemistry between one another which you guys bear witness to upon listening to the end result.
Artist's website: mdotdasupa.com
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