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Description of the track:
Being swamped with work for far too long, we started jamming one night with some music apps on an iPad Mini. Orphion with JamUp Pro XT literally knocked us off our socks with this amazing screaming guitar sound, around which we built Omacrie.
The full app line-up:
- Orphion + JamUp Pro XT for the lead guitar
- Magellan + JamUp Pro XT for the 2nd guitar
- DM-1 + EchoPad for the drums
Audiobus strung all the apps together, with Multitrack DAW in the output slot. Enjoy!
Artist's website: soundcloud.com/bad-maxton
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