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Description of the track:
This track is a medley of the music I composed for Erwan Barillot's last movie, "Identités Permutées". It relates the story of two very different young men whose the identities have been swapped by a mysterious phenomena...
For this script, I had to compose with an atmosphere full of despair and tension: that's why you will notice the massive use of strings in tremolo, bells, and brass. The celesta is also very present, particularly to depict the mystery of the situation.
I drew inspiration in John Williams' music and even in Gustav Mahler's music, which both represent to me a great achievement in symphonic writing.
So, what are your impressions?
Artist's website: erwann-masson.tumblr.com/
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