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Description of the track:
Haterade is the first production of mine that I went into with a specific musical goal in mind. Normally, I take the musical approach of starting with a blank canvas and seeing what can be created. With Haterade I set out to create a track that had two main qualities: lots of rhythm and groove, and to be more chord progression centric versus melodic centric.
Artist's website: soundcloud.com/robertanthonyp
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