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Description of the track:
The concept behind this tune is literally "an avant garde track found on an obscure, old LP that sounds ahead of it's time." This was a real junk drawer track, using the Oatmeal synth, Ambient by Audiobulb, a ladspa plugin effect called VyNil, Edison and Audacity for tracking and FL Studio for mixing, and lots of little bits of whatever else I could throw at it.
Artist's website: soundcloud.com/braindouche
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