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Stoner rock song triggered by doodling with Steinberg's free Nanologue synth on an iPad Mini through IAA (Inter-App Audio) from within Garageband. Quickly started jamming with Garageband's guitars (riffs and lead), then added drums. Final mastering with AudioMastering.Artist's website: https://soundcloud.com/bad-maxton
I guess the heavy riff somehow mirrors the stress I'm having lately, but no idea what the synth is referring to, though. ;-) Thanks for your feedback!
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