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Workshop #62: Rip Off Artist by Future of Failure

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At Audiotuts+ we irregularly put up a reader track for workshopping and critique (find out how to submit a track). This is how it works: you upload your song, and every week or so we'll publish one here and step away from the podium. The floor is yours to talk about the track and how the artist can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.

This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. They have put their track (and their heart and soul) in your hands to learn and get useful feedback.

  • Do you enjoy the song or track itself? Does it have potential?
  • Can the arrangement be improved?
  • How did you find the mix? What would you do differently?
  • What do you enjoy about the rhythm track? What can be done to improve it?
  • Is the choice of instruments relevant and effective for the style/song?
  • Are the lyrics (if any) effective? Does the style, arrangement and genre of the song suit them?
  • Can you suggest any specific techniques that might improve the track?
  • Do you have any other constructive feedback?

Rip Off Artist by Future of Failure

Description of the track:

The Future of Failure is a soundtrack album for a film project I am working on. This track "Rip Off Artist" will be featured in the opening sequence to the film. This is a work in progress, so the final version will be joined to another track seamlessly. I created the track using Reason 4.

Terms of Use: Anyone can download the track from Bandcamp. I would like to build a fan base, so I can send info out on the album when it is completed.

Have a listen to the track and offer your constructive criticism for this Workshop in the comments section.


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