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Workshop #73: The Untitled by Plüton!

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At Audiotuts+ we irregularly put up a reader track for workshopping and critique (find out how to submit a track). This is how it works: you upload your song, and every week or so we'll publish one here and step away from the podium. The floor is yours to talk about the track and how the artist can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.

This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. They have put their track (and their heart and soul) in your hands to learn and get useful feedback.

  • Do you enjoy the song or track itself? Does it have potential?
  • Can the arrangement be improved?
  • How did you find the mix? What would you do differently?
  • What do you enjoy about the rhythm track? What can be done to improve it?
  • Is the choice of instruments relevant and effective for the style/song?
  • Are the lyrics (if any) effective? Does the style, arrangement and genre of the song suit them?
  • Can you suggest any specific techniques that might improve the track?
  • Do you have any other constructive feedback?

The Untitled by Plüton!

Artist's website: pluton.bandcamp.com/

Description of the track:

We're a band of two, Plüton! from Istanbul. We did couple of electronica covers of rock & pop songs from the 90's. This is the first song of ours. We'll re-take vocals and guitars to finalize this, so we thought it'd be good to have some feedback on other elements. This version of the track is available for free download on our bandcamp. Enjoy!

Terms of Use: We'd prefer people to download the track on our bandcamp as far as we're building a mailing list there. Thank you.

Have a listen to the track and offer your constructive criticism for this Workshop in the comments section.


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