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Description of the track:
I have written over 300 songs, and then realized one day that I better start recording some of them! I picked this song to record first, because it was the simplest song, and I wanted to focus on learning how to record and mix before tackling more complicated songs.
I play all the instruments myself and recorded the song using Cubase. I've remixed and rearranged the song a number of times, but it still doesn't have the polish and professionalism I would like. I'm spending a lot of time on it because I think that if I can get it sounding great, then recording my other songs will be much more straightforward.
Any feed back and suggestions would be very welcome.
Artist's website: soundcloud.com/kirbyallen
Here's the latest version of the song, on SoundCloud:
Lyrics:
Well you think you got an easy victory, by picking on a little guy like me
Well I confess you caught me by surprise, but that just lit the fire in my eyes
When I was young I used to run away, from anything that even looked my way
But now that I've grown up to be a man, I'm not afraid to finally make stand
Chorus:
So don't count me out, cause this fight ain't done
You may think it's over, but it's just begun
So don't look now, cause here I come
You may think it's over, but it's just. be. gun. Yeah!
Hey, hey... (tribal warfare chant)
Chords:
Verse - A, D, G, D
Chorus - G, D, A
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